2009-10 Western Conference preview: Further haiku

Konnichiwa again.
Partly because I have recently taken a shine to Japanese poetry and theatre (what?), and partly because it will be much, much easier and quicker this way, I have decided to preview the season for each conference in the ancient art of haiku. All teams will be covered in the order in which I believe they’ll finish. Yes, these are meant to take some thought.
dark-haired aggressors
blood mingles with their war paint
lo! their savage grins
primordial fear
the deep their briny palace
a feast ‘neath the waves
the supple earth charred
scythe of the great leveler
Kagutsuchi’s light
their skill yet unmatched
fading heroes, standards borne
sanguine mail ragged
Northwestern keepers!
a nation’s pride rests in you
defend its ideals
the mighty river
songs of sorrow washed away
fresh currents bring joy
again you grow tall,
deciduous sentinels.
no man holds sway here
a pack prowls the night
their hunt a success, feeding
now sated they howl
a calm appearance
submerged fury betrayed!
they paddle nowhere
winter’s brutish truth
bitter wind tears through pretense
tattered cloaks, dreams dashed
eyes in the tall grass
for years they waited to pounce
their chance never came
their plans in ruin
a fiendish court’s young victims
slumping in great thrones
fast news travels slow
the inky void’s brilliant dots!
this light is long-dead
crude imagining;
a fate black as its namesake
unhappy tundra
once they rumbled down
softly alighting today
the sky’s pallid tears
Arigato.
September 30th, 2009 at 1:46 pm
Is that the Hawks at #1?? Wow, someone’s balsy.
September 30th, 2009 at 4:16 pm
Is that sarcasm?
October 1st, 2009 at 2:36 pm
Here is my interpretation:
1 - Chicago
2 - Sanjose
3 - Calgary
4 - Detroit
5 - Vancouver
6 - St.louis
7 - Anaheim
8 - Pheonix
9 - Minesota
10 - Columbus
11 - nashville
12 - Los Angeles
13 - Dallas
14 - Edmonton
15 - Colorado
Am I close?
October 1st, 2009 at 6:24 pm
Holy shite. It got dusty in here when I read from bottom up and realized that you had the Yotes at 8. OWWWW!!!
October 12th, 2009 at 11:43 am
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